the idael teacher應(yīng)該是筆誤吧,應(yīng)該用an ideal teacher（因?yàn)檫@里不是特指）
knowledge不是可數(shù)名詞,所以應(yīng)改為much*（個(gè)人建議用profound knowledge豐富的知識(shí)）第一句話你要表達(dá)的意思是“我認(rèn)為一個(gè)理想化的教師應(yīng)該首先有足夠的知識(shí),因?yàn)楸仨氁凶銐虻闹R(shí)才有資格作為老師”.其實(shí)這種表達(dá)有點(diǎn)啰嗦.我給你一個(gè)改編過的,你參考一下把.
Firstly,an ideal teacher must have profound knowledge.Secondly,he should be friendly to every his friends and be patient with the bad students who badly need our guide and help.He should teach him effective ways in study.Generally speaking,however,an elder teacher is more competent than the younger one.This is my requirement for an ideal teacher.
看來(lái)樓主的作文水平還是有待提高的,不過沒關(guān)系.Practice makes perfect.