個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷－英語(yǔ)問題!
RESUME
I once have traveled to Hong Kong, deeply in love with the city Hong Kong.
Hong Kong is an open international city, and the University of Hong Kong is the best university in Hong Kong. I choose the University of Hong Kong, because the University of Hong Kong uses international education concepts and advanced methods of management, it is consistent with my concepts in my heart and will be to benefit me greatly in the future.
I would like to engage in economic and financial professional. Under the environment of international financial crisis, engaging in the profession maybe have a certain degree of risk, but I am confident that through my efforts I can make a difference and own myself achievement enterprise space.
I am always excellent both in character and scholarship , with the outstanding behaviour in school, so I serve as one of the class leaders for a long time, and repeatedly have been rated as outstanding class cadres, Miyoshi students and excellent students. Specially, it was tripe-A student of Fujian Province that I was evaluated as in my third year of high school.
My interest is widespread, I have a strong curiosity to many things and the courage to explore. I love the society, and I’m good at communication, so I think that the teaching patterns of the University of Hong Kong is a great advantage to me.
I sincerely hope that the University of Hong Kong can give serious consideration to my application, and can give me the study opportunity.
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謝謝.