姐姐,您好,您能幫我在改一篇考研英語小作文嗎?
姐姐,這是一篇12年英語2的小作文,麻煩您在有空時幫我改一改,受累!（如果有語法錯誤,麻煩您幫我指出來）
Directions:
Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you brought from an online store the other day.Write an email to the customer service center to
1.make a complaint ,and
2.demand a prompt solution
Dear sir or madam,
I am a customer who regularly buy something from your online store,I am completely disappointed to find that the service you provide is far from satisfactory.
I am referring to this thing that I just bought an electronic dictionary from your online store last week,but there are some problems with it.Firstly,the dictionary is broken when I received it .Secondly ,the battery needs charging after only two hours of use.
Therefore,something must be done to solve the problems,because they bring me much trouble in my study.You can either compensate me at a reasonable price or alternatively send me a new machine by express mail.Lastly,please tell me which solution you prefer at you earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming