一個英文長句,不知道寫得對不對?
Our team constructed a feedback loop model to depict the process of arctic ice cap melting with absorbing solar energy, and coupled it with a heat transfer model based on the convection of ocean currents.
我們組建立了一個（描述（伴隨太陽能吸收的）北極冰蓋融化過程的）反饋模型,并將它與一個（基于洋流對流換熱的）傳熱模型耦合.
Our team constructed a feedback loop model （to depict the process of arctic ice cap melting （with absorbing solar energy））, and coupled it with a heat transfer model （based on the convection of ocean currents）.
看看該加the的地方有沒有都加，或多加？
with absorbing solar energy 好還是 with solar energy absorbing 好？