大師,幫我看下這個(gè)中譯英有哪些語法錯(cuò)誤呢? 能否給個(gè)更標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的翻譯呢?
翻譯這句中文： 我最大的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是熱心腸、外向,有時(shí)我喜歡讀報(bào)紙,當(dāng)我得知某人身患重病或者缺錢讀書時(shí),我會(huì)盡自己最大的努力捐款并呼吁朋友加入進(jìn)來,幫助他人不僅很有意義,而且也逐漸成了我的生活習(xí)慣.在我閑暇時(shí)間,我喜歡旅游、打羽毛球以及與朋友交流.定期的鍛煉讓我保持健康、充滿活力和樂觀的心態(tài).
My greatest merit is I am a girl with warm-hearted and outgoing. Sometimes I like reading the newspaper.And when I know someone sufferingfrom serious illness or lack of money to go to school, I will do my best todonate and appeal my friends to attend this activity.Helping others is not only meaningful , it could also gradually turn into a living habit of mine. In myspare time, I like traveling, playing badminton and communicating with friends.Regular exercises keep me in good health, full of energy and optimism.
上述翻譯的英文有哪些錯(cuò)誤呢?大師能更標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的重新翻譯上述的中文么?