根據(jù)這篇文章的特點,我翻譯的時候盡量避免使用長句,并相應(yīng)增加了一部分關(guān)聯(lián)詞,使文章更清晰,
I am capable to work independently and initiatively.For instance,I adapt well to business trip and mobile office.Once I retured to headquarter until I had finished my work for four consecutive months alone.I am adept to apply various kinds of publicity stunts to negotiate with different clients,result orientedly,and I will never give up unless the sales targets had been achieved.Meanwhile,I attach great importance to the cooperation with functional departments to start my work in the front-line,more quickly and efficiently.I am eager for the sense of achievment of overcoming difficulties; I am passionate to develop new clients at any time.According to the consideration of team cooperation,I am more willing to achieve the team goals at full stretch rather than my personal selling target.
Confidence,keenness and staunchness,that is the best of my strengths.
這是根據(jù)你的原文翻譯的,但我個人認為有幾句的語序需要調(diào)換,使其更有邏輯.修改版如下：
I am capable to work independently and initiatively.For instance,I adapt well to business trip and mobile office.Once I retured to headquarter until I had finished my work for four consecutive months alone.I am adept to apply various kinds of publicity stunts to negotiate with different clients,result orientedly,and I will never give up unless the sales targets had been achieved.I do not only focus on the self-improvement about work,but also attach more imprtance to team coocupation.(一個帶有總結(jié)的句子,會使文章脈絡(luò)更清晰）.On the one hand,(使用這類連接詞會使文章更有邏輯）I am eager for the sense of achievment of overcoming difficulties; I am passionate to develop new clients at any time.On the other hand,I value the chance of cooperation with functional departments which make my work in the front-line,more quickly and efficiently.And according to the consideration of team cooperation,I am more willing to achieve the team goals at full stretch rather than my personal selling target.
Confidence,keenness and staunchness,that is the best of my strengths.
（這里也可使用強調(diào)句,語氣更強烈,It's confidence,keenness and staunchness that are the most impressive advantages of mine!)
我不遺余力的幫你弄這個的哦,很辛苦滴~還有不明白的可以繼續(xù)追問,要是滿意采納的時候追加給我分哦~