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假如你的英國筆友Peter來信說寒假要來中國旅游,希望你能回信給一些吃喝玩樂以及游覽名勝古跡的攻略.
DearPeter:
I’m very glad that you will come to China in thewinter holiday,and it’s my honor to tell you somewhere good to visit in ourcountry.
Beijing has many historic spotsand interest places.Have you ever heard of “he who doesn't reach the Great Wallis not a true man”?I think you may have.So,I suggest that you can go andvisit the Great Wall.When you climb on the Great Wall,you will find that itis like a dragon,and you can feast your eyes on the beautiful scene.You’dbetter bring some food and water,because the long walk may make you tired.Whenyou’re hungry,you can go to the nearest restaurant.
In the afternoon,you can visit the Tian'anmen Square.In the other days,you can go to other famous place,such as the Imperial Palace.
Yours,
William