1.第一句話有些別扭,all the teachers我就覺得更好.
2.they say I am funny.
3第三行but大寫或者but前用逗號(hào)
4dynamic 形容詞,應(yīng)改為名詞energy,the life改為my life更好些
5on the one hand ,on the other hand 用法錯(cuò)誤.這用于說明兩個(gè)對(duì)立方面的,用于前面說好的方面,后面說不好的方面.on the one hand want to improve my listening and speaking .on the other hand ,I want to stand o my own two feet 可改為 I mainly want to improve my reading and speaking ability,and meanwhile I would like to go on my own feet.
6.第五行I大寫
7倒2行so中s大寫
8最后一行here前去to
附：對(duì)其他回答進(jìn)行更正
the guitar 中the 不要去
I have much MORE dynamic to enjoy the life .這樣改也不對(duì).have后要名詞.
英語翻譯
英語翻譯
找錯(cuò)【都找到了加懸賞】：
Good morning every teacher!
My name is Liu Yun .I’m 14 years old .I’m outgoing .I have many friends .They said I was funny.
As you can see ,I’m a little bit heavy .but I don’t think that’s important .It means I have much dynamic to enjoy the life .
About this English summer camp ,on the one hand want to improve my listening and speaking .on the other hand ,I want to stand o my own two feet .I’ll try my best .i hope I can get on well with other students.
I think I’ll experience something different.
I like singing songs and playing the guitar ,and I have been playing erhu for 6 years.But my guitar and erhu are very heavy .so it’s too difficult for me to bring it to here .So now,It ‘s time for my talent show.I’ll sing a song called
找錯(cuò)【都找到了加懸賞】：
Good morning every teacher!
My name is Liu Yun .I’m 14 years old .I’m outgoing .I have many friends .They said I was funny.
As you can see ,I’m a little bit heavy .but I don’t think that’s important .It means I have much dynamic to enjoy the life .
About this English summer camp ,on the one hand want to improve my listening and speaking .on the other hand ,I want to stand o my own two feet .I’ll try my best .i hope I can get on well with other students.
I think I’ll experience something different.
I like singing songs and playing the guitar ,and I have been playing erhu for 6 years.But my guitar and erhu are very heavy .so it’s too difficult for me to bring it to here .So now,It ‘s time for my talent show.I’ll sing a song called
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