幫我看看下面幾個(gè)句子,錯(cuò)了幫我更正下.最好是連成分一起分析下（錯(cuò)誤或不好的句子）
1.Coffee came to play an increasingly important role in our life.
2.Life is always full of surprises,and some people enjoy them while others choose the opposite way .人的一生中總是充滿了驚喜,有些人很是喜歡,而有些人卻不以為然
3.有充分的理由支持如下.
The view are supported by sound reasons as follows.
4.Before giving my opinion,I think it is essential to look at the argument on both sides.
要表明我的觀點(diǎn)之前,我想有必要分析比方的論點(diǎn)
5.Air is indispensable to life.
空氣是生命所必需的.
Everybody has a dream,I am no exception,每個(gè)人都有一個(gè)夢(mèng)想,我也不例外
6 Whereas,it also brings negative effects .
反之,也會(huì)帶來負(fù)面影響.
7.利遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)大于弊
the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
8 So,you never know where this road may lead to.
所以.你永遠(yuǎn)不知道這條路將領(lǐng)你通往何方
9 A sense of responsibility of a talent is a person of respect.
一個(gè)有責(zé)任感的人才是一個(gè)令人敬佩的人