The weather was hot應該改成：It was hot.
Our school startsat eight thirty.應該改成：Our class started at eight thirty.
I'm happy應該改成：I was happy.
Because the match lesson(數學課）and art lesson so fun.應該改成：Because the match lesson(數學課）and art lesson are so funny.
I'm excited.應該改成：I was excited.
Because my school held（舉辦）gymkhana（運動會）.應該改成：Because the gymkhana was held in my school.
So,I hope this day and today was great day!應該改成：So,I wish today a great day!
請幫我看一下這篇英語作文寫得有沒有錯!
請幫我看一下這篇英語作文寫得有沒有錯!
I went to school
Today,I went to school.The weather was hot.
Our school startsat eight thirty.
In the morning,I'm happy.Because the match lesson(數學課）and
art lesson so fun.
In the afteroon.I'm excited.Because my school held（舉辦）gymkhana（運動會）.
So,I hope this day and today was great day!
I went to school
Today,I went to school.The weather was hot.
Our school startsat eight thirty.
In the morning,I'm happy.Because the match lesson(數學課）and
art lesson so fun.
In the afteroon.I'm excited.Because my school held（舉辦）gymkhana（運動會）.
So,I hope this day and today was great day!
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