總體來說很不錯,基本上都沒什么大問題.就只是幾處語法方面有點不太恰當(dāng).
第二段第7行 “All three of us work”中all 跟three沖突了,就只能用一個.
第二段開頭“Because the nature of our occupations”應(yīng)該是“Because of the nature of our occupations”
第二段第三行“They are getting old now”,我覺得換成“They are getting older and older now”效果更好.該行的最后“If they could come”有點中國式英語的味道,建議用“If they come”就好.
糾正英文文法錯誤
糾正英文文法錯誤
這是我一阿姨給簽證官寫的信,用來申請她父母去美國探親的.我覺得寫的不錯,就是由點語法上的問題.
Dear Visa Officer,
This is XXX from XXX,USA.I am the oldest daughter of the two nonimmigrant visa applicants.I am writing this letter to state my family status in the United States in order to assist you with the process of my parents’ visa applications.My husband became a U.S.permanent resident in 2004,while my daughter and I became permanent residents in 2005.My daughter is currently enrolled in University of XX as a freshman with a full-ride scholarship.My husband and I both work in restaurants.We have a single house and two personal vehicles.All three of us work which ensures a stable family income.After paying the monthly mortgage and the utility bills we are still able to deposit money into the bank.Therefore,we are certain that we can provide monetary need,transportation,and housing during my parents’ temporary stay in the U.S.
Because the nature of our occupations,we do not have the time to go back to China and visit my parents.My family really misses them and would like them to come and visit us during the summer.They are getting old now; this might be their only time to visit the U.S.If they could come,we plan to have a family trip to XXX and visit some of the tourist attractions.
Again,I hope this letter can help you with your decision making.
Sincerely,
XXXX
這是我一阿姨給簽證官寫的信,用來申請她父母去美國探親的.我覺得寫的不錯,就是由點語法上的問題.
Dear Visa Officer,
This is XXX from XXX,USA.I am the oldest daughter of the two nonimmigrant visa applicants.I am writing this letter to state my family status in the United States in order to assist you with the process of my parents’ visa applications.My husband became a U.S.permanent resident in 2004,while my daughter and I became permanent residents in 2005.My daughter is currently enrolled in University of XX as a freshman with a full-ride scholarship.My husband and I both work in restaurants.We have a single house and two personal vehicles.All three of us work which ensures a stable family income.After paying the monthly mortgage and the utility bills we are still able to deposit money into the bank.Therefore,we are certain that we can provide monetary need,transportation,and housing during my parents’ temporary stay in the U.S.
Because the nature of our occupations,we do not have the time to go back to China and visit my parents.My family really misses them and would like them to come and visit us during the summer.They are getting old now; this might be their only time to visit the U.S.If they could come,we plan to have a family trip to XXX and visit some of the tourist attractions.
Again,I hope this letter can help you with your decision making.
Sincerely,
XXXX
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