能把外教標(biāo)的劃一下嗎?
there is no doubt that it is beneficial to improve our literacy ability這個(gè)是說提高讀寫能力很有用 不是說讀書對提高讀寫能力很有用
中間你好像是要用A is to B what C is to D 這個(gè)句型你記錯(cuò)了
讀書可以直接就是reading 你文章中多是用read books 很不地道
a person can not live a better life in the modern world這里沒對比不要用better
Reading makes us understand the world more 這里make 換成enable 較好
We can also go to the desert without having to fear the threat of thirst without the threat of thirst就行
還有些小的錯(cuò)誤或者是不當(dāng)?shù)玫胤骄筒徽f了 不知道是不是符合樓主要求