1.paid off 可以考慮改為 works,感覺pay off 一般指金錢收益上的
2.第二段第一句,如果要表達(dá)如何安排你的大學(xué)生活,那你這句不太正確.可以 How to have your university life well prepared?或者 What's your plan to have a wonderful unidersity life?
3.independent of 應(yīng)該改為 independent from 表示從.獨(dú)立起來.
4.最后一段,i 可以去掉,have 也可以去掉,wish you a .如果要有have,改為 Hope you have a.
congratulate you again 也可以換成 congratulations to you again...
請各位英語達(dá)人幫我改下作文,超急!馬上考研!
請各位英語達(dá)人幫我改下作文,超急!馬上考研!
Dear Li Ming,
I am writing this letter to congratulate you on your being successfullyadmitted to Peking University.Your hard work has paid off and we are all so proud of you .
How to get prepared for your university life?I am so happy to give yousome suggestions as follows.First,being independent of parents in life andemotion.Second,taking exercise every day.Besides,traveling with your classmates during these months.Yunnan and Hangzhouare great choices.It will be an unforgettable memory(表回憶時,可數(shù)) in your whole life.
Congratulate you again and I wish you have a colorful life in university.
Sincerely,
Zhang Wei
Dear Li Ming,
I am writing this letter to congratulate you on your being successfullyadmitted to Peking University.Your hard work has paid off and we are all so proud of you .
How to get prepared for your university life?I am so happy to give yousome suggestions as follows.First,being independent of parents in life andemotion.Second,taking exercise every day.Besides,traveling with your classmates during these months.Yunnan and Hangzhouare great choices.It will be an unforgettable memory(表回憶時,可數(shù)) in your whole life.
Congratulate you again and I wish you have a colorful life in university.
Sincerely,
Zhang Wei
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