北京的B要大寫
He is of medium build and he is of medium height比較繞口,可改為He is of medium build and medium height.
hobbys改為hobbies
His hobbys are playing the violin and playing sports.He is very good at swimming and playing volleyball.過于繞口,(且有語法錯誤,可改為He likes piaying the violin and doing sports .He is good at swimming and playing volleyball .
僅供參考
★☆幫忙看一下我這篇作文,有沒有錯誤,有錯誤的幫忙修改一下（語法錯誤要分析） ☆★
★☆幫忙看一下我這篇作文,有沒有錯誤,有錯誤的幫忙修改一下（語法錯誤要分析） ☆★
My Idol
My Idol is a scientist.His name is Yuan Longping.His date of birth is 1930,9.His birthplace is beijing.He is of medium build and he is of medium height.His hobbys are playing the wiolin and playing sports.He is wery good at swimming and playing volleyball.His why famous is "Father of Hybrid Rice".In 2001,he has China's State Supreme Science and Technology.In 2004,he has World Food Prize.I think he is a very great scientist.
My Idol
My Idol is a scientist.His name is Yuan Longping.His date of birth is 1930,9.His birthplace is beijing.He is of medium build and he is of medium height.His hobbys are playing the wiolin and playing sports.He is wery good at swimming and playing volleyball.His why famous is "Father of Hybrid Rice".In 2001,he has China's State Supreme Science and Technology.In 2004,he has World Food Prize.I think he is a very great scientist.
英語人氣：734 ℃時間：2020-06-15 11:51:33
優(yōu)質解答
我來回答
類似推薦
猜你喜歡
- 1寒冷的冬天呼出氣體后,會看到白霧,出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因是?
- 2空氣對我們很重要的英語作文
- 3張阿姨用112元去買窗簾布,由于窗簾布每米降價1元,因此張阿姨所帶的錢可以比原來多買2米,原來每米多少元?
- 4什么叫電能 作用
- 5什么時候用I were 什么時候用I was
- 6描述人生最經(jīng)典的一句話是什么~
- 7用同樣的2臺抽水機,3小時可以澆地1.2公頃,4臺抽水機1小時可以澆地多少公頃?
- 8若x²+2(a+1)x=16是完全平方式,求a²-2a+1的值
- 9已知I={X|-1≤X≤3},M={X|-1
- 10figure sth.out和figure out sth.的區(qū)別?
- 11高粱桿可以吃嗎
- 12誰可以給我說說I 與U I與R 以及伏安法測電阻中滑動變阻器的作用分別是什么,最好把實驗寫下 thx