英語翻譯
畢業(yè)設計的翻譯，有些專業(yè)術語，英語高手幫我看看有沒有語法錯誤：
Cold rolled strip steel is a steel product with a hot rolled strip as raw material，be rolled by cold rolling mill at room temperature .Cold rolled strip has advantages of smooth surface,high dimensional accuracy and excellent mechanical properties,most of the products will be rolled,and a large part of them will be processed into coated steel.Rolled cold-rolled sheet has high efficiency to produce,and easy to use,is conducive to subsequent processing.Therefore it is widely used,and has gradually replaced of the hot roll sheet with the same thickness.The output of cold rolled strip and sheet steel in the advanced industrial countries accounted for 30% of total output.