1.Recently, Xi'an’ weather is turning cool, how about shanghai?口語是行的,但書面語,不行,改成Recently, Xi'an’ weather is turning cool.How about shanghai?或者Recently, Xi'an’ weather is turning cool; how about shanghai?
2.kindly用的不太好,因?yàn)閗indly的意思是親切地, 和藹地, 友好地, 仁慈地 ……改成surely.此外將please放在后面讀起來較好
3.I lack of preparedness at that time, so did not formally proposed.語法錯(cuò)誤,因?yàn)閘ack是及物動(dòng)詞,將of去掉,準(zhǔn)備是preparation.此外這個(gè)句子沒有關(guān)聯(lián)詞,應(yīng)該是because i lack preparation at that time,so i did not formally proposed.
4.時(shí)態(tài)不對,將leave改成left,study是及物動(dòng)詞,將of 去掉,knowledge是不可數(shù)名詞,將s去掉
5.英語里如果用although表示“雖然”,那么不可以在后面加“but”,所以將but去掉,既然是“自己的努力”就沒必要加their了,將之去掉
6.Currently I am available daily work more busy, and did not use the software for practice.很亂,改成;
Currently I am busying with my daily work , and don't have the available software for practice at day
7.I would like to learn more knowledge, have a greater development. 這里有兩個(gè)謂語,也就是相當(dāng)于兩個(gè)句子,那么他們之間就不能用逗號(hào)連接,應(yīng)該用分號(hào)者句號(hào).而且這句話的因果邏輯關(guān)系表達(dá)不明顯,改成
:I would like to learn more knowledge,so as to have a greater development.
8.將Although I find this request very unreasonable, but I still want you to give me a chance, allow me to transfer CAD engineering positions.中的but去掉,將want改成hope 比較好,將chance換成opportunity比較正式.positions后面的s去掉,這里同樣犯了一個(gè)句子有兩個(gè)或兩個(gè)以上謂語的錯(cuò)誤,改成Although I find this request very unreasonable,I still hope you to give me a chance, and allow me to get CAD engineering position
9.副詞前面不加任何冠詞,將the去掉
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西安最近的天氣已經(jīng)開始慢慢轉(zhuǎn)涼,上海的天氣還是依然很熱嗎?
請?jiān)谛量喙ぷ鞯耐瑫r(shí),一定注意保重身體.
上次您來西安的時(shí)候,我也曾向您提起過調(diào)換崗位的事情,
但由于自己準(zhǔn)備不足等種種原因,沒有正式提出.
在您走后的這段時(shí)間里,我抓緊時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)設(shè)計(jì)軟件及各方面的相關(guān)知識(shí).
現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)可以獨(dú)立地完成一般的3D建模等工作.雖然我沒有良好的機(jī)械方面的背景.
但是我相信通過自己的努力與學(xué)習(xí),可以勝任一個(gè)CAD工程師的日常工作.如果可以的話,我想支持日本的機(jī)械類的工作.
另外,西安是我的家鄉(xiāng),我想我有一個(gè)比較好的穩(wěn)定性.
目前我自己現(xiàn)有的日常工作也比較繁忙,而且在白天又沒有可供練習(xí)使用的軟件.
出于自身想學(xué)到更多的知識(shí),有一個(gè)更大的發(fā)展,雖然我也覺得這個(gè)請求非常的無理,但是我仍希望您能給我一次機(jī)會(huì),批準(zhǔn)我轉(zhuǎn)入CAD工程師的崗位.
最后,祝您工作順利.
Recently,Xi'an’ weather is turning cool,how about shanghai?Is it still hot?
Except hard work,please be kindly take care of health.
The last time you come to Xi'an,I have talked you to swap positions.
However,I lack of preparedness at that time,so did not formally proposed.
Since you leave to xi’an,I lose no time to study of mechanical design software and other knowledges.
Now,I can independently complete the general 3D modeling works and so on.Although I do not have a good mechanical background.
But I believe that through their own efforts and learning,I could do a CAD engineer's daily work.If possible,I would like to support the Japan division's machinery work.
In addition,Xi'an is my hometown,I think I have a good stability.
Currently I am available daily work more busy,and did not use the software for practice.
Currently my available daily work more busy,and didn’t have the software for practice at day.
I would like to learn more knowledge,have a greater development.Although I find this request very unreasonable,but I still want you to give me a chance,allow me to transfer CAD engineering positions.
The finally,wish you success in your work.
西安最近的天氣已經(jīng)開始慢慢轉(zhuǎn)涼,上海的天氣還是依然很熱嗎?
請?jiān)谛量喙ぷ鞯耐瑫r(shí),一定注意保重身體.
上次您來西安的時(shí)候,我也曾向您提起過調(diào)換崗位的事情,
但由于自己準(zhǔn)備不足等種種原因,沒有正式提出.
在您走后的這段時(shí)間里,我抓緊時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)設(shè)計(jì)軟件及各方面的相關(guān)知識(shí).
現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)可以獨(dú)立地完成一般的3D建模等工作.雖然我沒有良好的機(jī)械方面的背景.
但是我相信通過自己的努力與學(xué)習(xí),可以勝任一個(gè)CAD工程師的日常工作.如果可以的話,我想支持日本的機(jī)械類的工作.
另外,西安是我的家鄉(xiāng),我想我有一個(gè)比較好的穩(wěn)定性.
目前我自己現(xiàn)有的日常工作也比較繁忙,而且在白天又沒有可供練習(xí)使用的軟件.
出于自身想學(xué)到更多的知識(shí),有一個(gè)更大的發(fā)展,雖然我也覺得這個(gè)請求非常的無理,但是我仍希望您能給我一次機(jī)會(huì),批準(zhǔn)我轉(zhuǎn)入CAD工程師的崗位.
最后,祝您工作順利.
Recently,Xi'an’ weather is turning cool,how about shanghai?Is it still hot?
Except hard work,please be kindly take care of health.
The last time you come to Xi'an,I have talked you to swap positions.
However,I lack of preparedness at that time,so did not formally proposed.
Since you leave to xi’an,I lose no time to study of mechanical design software and other knowledges.
Now,I can independently complete the general 3D modeling works and so on.Although I do not have a good mechanical background.
But I believe that through their own efforts and learning,I could do a CAD engineer's daily work.If possible,I would like to support the Japan division's machinery work.
In addition,Xi'an is my hometown,I think I have a good stability.
Currently I am available daily work more busy,and did not use the software for practice.
Currently my available daily work more busy,and didn’t have the software for practice at day.
I would like to learn more knowledge,have a greater development.Although I find this request very unreasonable,but I still want you to give me a chance,allow me to transfer CAD engineering positions.
The finally,wish you success in your work.
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