My last birthday
Today is June 3rd and it is my birthday. i remembered my parents bought a supring present for me on my last birthday. they took me to the cinema to see a cartoon film. it was so cool and I want to see it again. we ate a very big cake at home with my friends. i was so happy. after supper, my father taught me to ride a bike. I fell down many times, but i was lucky because i didn't break my leg. I will remember last birthday forever.小學(xué)水平普通一點的有嗎我學(xué)習(xí)不太好這個對我來說有點假你改幾處錯誤就行了啊。這種句子應(yīng)該可以的。你改簡單一點吧。好吧