修改高中英語作文了
人人都渴望幸福,但有時我們忙于學(xué)業(yè)忙于工作而忽視了生活中幸福的點點滴滴.你認(rèn)為幸福是什么?結(jié)合生活中的事例闡述你對幸福的理解.
我的作文：
Happiness is a vital mood which many people neglect from time to time .In my opinion ,happiness is easy to achieve if you always keep a usual mind .
A large majority of people think that life won’t be at ease without enough money or high position（好的地位） .So,they strive for the goals every day and have no happiness.In fact,their definition to happiness isn’t exact.
From my point of view,happiness is a positive attitude to life.An unexpected present,some encouraging words,even a bunch of fresh flowers can make me happy.For me ,I think that those who bring happiness to others are the happiest in the world.
Life is a book,in which happiness is the shinest part .What’s more,happiness is just like aperfume.Only when you yourself have it,will others smell and share it.
有些詞不知怎么翻才好,就亂寫了,因此括號里標(biāo)注了中文.自知有許多錯誤!懇請哥哥,姐姐們指出.也希望能從文章結(jié)構(gòu),文采等方面提出意見和建議,