修改高中英語作文了5
“永不放棄”一直被認(rèn)為是一種積極的生活態(tài)度,是個(gè)人成功的關(guān)鍵因素；但是,也有人認(rèn)為適當(dāng)放棄才是明智的選擇.你對(duì)此的看法如何?
我的作文：
Everyone of us was taught never to give up when we were young ,but whether it is really true What should we do on earth when facing the alternatives .
Many people ,including the adults ,think that ‘never give up ’ is a wise choice .They keep trying to reach their goals ,believing that success is waving to them around the corner as long as they have perseverance .Nevertheless ,many people fail despite of the hard-working .
Others think it’s wiser to give up under some circumstance ,as the old saying goes ‘you can’t have your cake,and eat it.’Constently,we can only choose the better one ,or we will lose both .
In my point of view ,both of their opinions sound reasonable.However,it’s important that we should make the right decision according to different situations .If we found our goals beyond our reach ,it is better to give up and set a more realistic aim.
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