這是我寫的英文商業(yè)信涵,幫忙看有沒能錯誤.
這是我寫的英文商業(yè)信涵,幫忙看有沒能錯誤.
We,China Tanhoo international Brands accessories Inc.,specializes in originally designing for world famous brand names,including Volkswagen,Audi,Siemens,furthermore,we also have invented a set of watches which are extinguished for its unique function and attractive appearance,for this,we have applied for its appearance patent in both America and China,and we are looking for opportunities to mutual cooperation.
We wonder if you are interested in doing business with us,if so,we will send you the pictures of our patent products after we get the contact with the person who is in charge.
We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
幫我看看有無語法錯誤(我們做的是專利營銷)
We,China Tanhoo international Brands accessories Inc.,specializes in originally designing for world famous brand names,including Volkswagen,Audi,Siemens,furthermore,we also have invented a set of watches which are extinguished for its unique function and attractive appearance,for this,we have applied for its appearance patent in both America and China,and we are looking for opportunities to mutual cooperation.
We wonder if you are interested in doing business with us,if so,we will send you the pictures of our patent products after we get the contact with the person who is in charge.
We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
幫我看看有無語法錯誤(我們做的是專利營銷)
英語人氣:632 ℃時間:2020-02-04 04:15:54
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
Try avoiding using the word "we" or "I" so often in business letters.Instead,you should use the word "you" more often,so whoever you are marketing your products to would be more engaging.
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