Today is April 26th.At 9:30 am,a girl and her friend were talking and riding when a car came from them.Then the car hit the bike,the girl's leg and head were hurt.Someone called the police.When the police came,he told the driver,"Revoke your driving licence and go to the hospital with her ."Then,the driver drove her to the hospital.I thought she would be healthier.
這篇作文中的幾大問題：通篇時態(tài)不一致,應都用過去式；從句中主從事態(tài)呼應；句子的符號；介詞的運用；有幾句中式英文翻譯法.上文是修改后的文章,你在看看把