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My winter holiday
Holiday, for me, is the most happy thing ever. In this period of time for me to relax, I can do whatever I want.
I'm a girl like quiet and peace. The most thing I love is staying in my favorite coffee shop after the vacation, listening to the guitar and reading my book. When tired, I'll watch the people outside come and go. The sunshine in winter, all those people and my relaxed mood become the most warm scenery in the cold winter.
Sometimes, a few friends will also come with me. In the small cafe, laughter will spread like the smell of coffee, beautiful and aftertaste.
I enjoy this relaxing vacation. It can make me feel warm and the love of winter.
我的假期
假期,對(duì)我來說是一件很開心的事情.在這段休整的日子里,我可以做很多我想做的事情.
我是個(gè)喜歡安靜的女孩子,也很享受放假后每天去我最愛的那家咖啡廳,聽著吉他看看書,累的時(shí)候看著窗外的人來來往往.冬日里的陽光,匆匆忙忙的行人和我悠閑的心情成為了這個(gè)冬日里最美麗的風(fēng)景.
有的時(shí)候,一些朋友也會(huì)和我一同過來.在這家小小的咖啡廳里,笑聲就會(huì)像咖啡的香氣一樣,美麗地傳播,令人回味.
我享受這個(gè)輕松的假期,因?yàn)樗梢宰屛腋惺艿蕉盏臏嘏?請(qǐng)問這個(gè)符合一個(gè)小學(xué)生嗎？基本上符合。小學(xué)生喝咖啡。。。這不符合一般將來時(shí)基本上符合。對(duì)于大城市的小學(xué)生來說，如果你從4年級(jí)開始學(xué)英語并且會(huì)將來時(shí)的話。當(dāng)然，里面?zhèn)€別詞匯略微超出范圍。你可以考慮替換。實(shí)際上也就 一個(gè)詞relax 難點(diǎn)。 可以把咖啡店改為Pizzahot, the guitar改為the music.