My Dream
When I was a child,I wanted to be a teacher.I thanks my teacher much because he taught me a lot.
On my tenth birthday,my father asked me,“What do you want to be when you grow up?”I answered proudly,“I want to be a teacher !”O(jiān)n hearing this,my father was very happy and said to me,“Work hard and your dream will come true.”
I wish When I came into the classroom,the children were were very happy.I introduced myself to them.Soon,I got on well with them.They all liked me and I loved them.With my father and headmaster's help,I did the work very well.
我的夢想
在我小的時候,我想做一名老師.我非常感謝我的老師,因為他交給我很多東西.
在我十歲生日那天,我爸爸問我：“長大了想做什么啊?"我自豪地回答," 我想當(dāng)老師!"聽我這么說,我爸爸非常高興地對我說,"努力吧你的夢想會實現(xiàn)的"
我希望當(dāng)我走進(jìn)教室,孩子們都非常高興,我向他們介紹自己,并很快與他們和睦相處.孩子們都喜歡我,我也愛他們.最后在爸爸和同事的幫助下,我把這個工作做的很好.
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