英語自我介紹幫我看看啊有錯(cuò)
英語自我介紹、請英語好的幫我看看啊有錯(cuò)、
幫涐改改、謝謝
hello,Everyone.My name is XX.NOW I am 16 years old .I was born in XX.There are 3 people in my family ,my parent and I .we love each other.I often play computer and listen to music .I want travel around world when i grow up.
hello,Everyone.My name is XX.NOW I am 16 years old .I was born in XX.There are 3 people in my family ,my parents and I .we love each other.I often play computer and listen to music.I want to travel around world when i grow up.
這樣？
其實(shí)涐也覺得最后一句怪怪的- -
涐不知道最后一句要寫什么，所以就隨便加一句- -、
必須八句么、沒辦法、原諒涐英語不好、