In the morning,(改逗號(hào),后面變小寫(xiě)）after breakfast,I watched TV for(看電視這里加個(gè)for） about an hour.Then,I went to my grandparents’ home.I was happy,because my brother was（這句話缺謂語(yǔ),加個(gè)was） at（the去掉,at home就行了,home是副詞） home too（加個(gè)too,你兄弟也在家）.
My brother and I had （a去掉,午飯前面不用加冠詞了） lunch on my grandparents’ home.After lunch,we went to my home.We played（planned沒(méi)必要,你在用過(guò)去語(yǔ)態(tài)敘述已經(jīng)發(fā)生的事情,沒(méi)必要再用“計(jì)劃”一說(shuō)了） the guitar,watched a（the改成a,因?yàn)槟銈兙褪强戳艘徊侩娪?沒(méi)有特指哪一部） movie and played（the去掉,玩了一些電腦游戲,也不需要用the來(lái)特指） computer games.At 5pm my brother went back to（回家是“去”不是“來(lái)”,用go的過(guò)去式went） his home.
I feel carefree today（加個(gè)表時(shí)間的今天,句子更完整,使feel的現(xiàn)在時(shí)更正確）.
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In the morning.After breakfast,I watched TV about an hour.Then,I went tomy grandparents’ home.I was happy,because my brother at the home.
My brother and I had a lunch on my grandparents’ home.After lunch,wewent to my home.We planed play the guitar,watch the movie and play thecomputer games.At 5pm my brother come back his home.
I feel carefree.
In the morning.After breakfast,I watched TV about an hour.Then,I went tomy grandparents’ home.I was happy,because my brother at the home.
My brother and I had a lunch on my grandparents’ home.After lunch,wewent to my home.We planed play the guitar,watch the movie and play thecomputer games.At 5pm my brother come back his home.
I feel carefree.
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