英語高手幫我看看我這有什么錯(cuò)誤嗎
Today,i readed a theme,it told me lot of information about ' The Memory Palace'(記憶宮殿）,i had tried build a room in my ' Palace' and put something what I want to remenber in there and made them scary to me,they will be easy to remember to me.But,I'm wrong.That really not a better way to remember something until I known that will make me crazy,because I don't want change them what I want to remember to something scary to me.But,if u Really Really Really want to remember something,like some knowledges in your books,your don't want to remember them but you must do it,you can try to use' The Memory Palace' ,it is really a preffect way to remember something what you don't want to remember.
自己翻譯的中文：今天我讀了一個(gè)話題,他給我介紹了關(guān)于“記憶宮殿”的事.我試著在我的宮殿里建了一個(gè)房間,放一些我在這里想記住的一些事情并且使他們對于我很恐懼,這會使我容易記住.但是我錯(cuò)了,直到我感覺他會使我瘋狂我才覺得他不是記住事情得很好方法.因?yàn)槲也幌雽⒛切┪蚁胗涀〉氖伦兂晌宜窇值?但是如果你確實(shí)確實(shí)確實(shí)想記住一些事情,像你課本中的一些知識,你不想記但必須得記住,你可以嘗試去用這個(gè)“記憶宮殿”.他是記住你不想記住的事情的一個(gè)很容易的很棒的辦法.
重點(diǎn)是看一下時(shí)態(tài)有沒有問題,我說今天發(fā)生過的事能用過去式嗎