My home town
Zhanjiang is my hometown, it is avery beautiful place. The sky is blue, the clouds are white,and the water is clear.
In the spring, the weather is warm and comfortable, we can fly kites on the prairie.wecanalso have the picnic .I think it's happy!
In the summer, the weather is hot. we can swim in swimmingpooland eat the watermelons.The watermelons are sweet and healthy.
Inthe autumn, the weather is cool and comfortable, the fishes swim in the stream. There are a lot of rain in the autumn, but very small.we can fly a kite, You can also see farmers harvest in the fieldIf winter comes, the weather gets cold, but never snows. We can barbecue at home. The food is really delicious!
This is my hometown, It’s a lovely hometown.I lovemyhometown.
有多處修改,這是改后的,請(qǐng)仔細(xì)看,請(qǐng)采納,謝謝
請(qǐng)幫我看一下這篇參賽作文有沒有什么語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤或者是什么毛病,
請(qǐng)幫我看一下這篇參賽作文有沒有什么語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤或者是什么毛病,
這篇是我打算用來(lái)參加奧林匹克英語(yǔ)作文比賽的作文,我是初一的學(xué)生.
My home town
Zhanjiang is my hometown,it is very beautiful place.The sky is blue,the clouds are white,the water is clear.
In the spring,the weather is warm andcomfortable,we can fly kites on the prairie.we also can have the picnic .Ithink it's happy!
In the summer,the weather is hot.we canswim in swim pool and eat thewatermelon.the watermelons are sweet and healthy.
In autumn,the weather is cool andcomfortable,the fish swimming in the stream.Autumn rain a lot,but very small.we can fly a kite,you can also see the farmers harvest scene.
If winter comes,the weather gets cold,butnever snow.We can barbecue at home.The food is really good!
This is my hometown,It’s a lovely hometown.I love my hometown.
這篇是我打算用來(lái)參加奧林匹克英語(yǔ)作文比賽的作文,我是初一的學(xué)生.
My home town
Zhanjiang is my hometown,it is very beautiful place.The sky is blue,the clouds are white,the water is clear.
In the spring,the weather is warm andcomfortable,we can fly kites on the prairie.we also can have the picnic .Ithink it's happy!
In the summer,the weather is hot.we canswim in swim pool and eat thewatermelon.the watermelons are sweet and healthy.
In autumn,the weather is cool andcomfortable,the fish swimming in the stream.Autumn rain a lot,but very small.we can fly a kite,you can also see the farmers harvest scene.
If winter comes,the weather gets cold,butnever snow.We can barbecue at home.The food is really good!
This is my hometown,It’s a lovely hometown.I love my hometown.
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