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My holiday
My holiday was not very good.Before my holiday I was going to study very hard in holiday.But I’m failed.First one week,I read a lot of book,but not the book I study now.I wanted to read many English books,but failed,too.After my hardworking one week,I became very lazy,I couldn’t wake up early.I must finish my homework,but I don’t know where to start.So I became a failure.But I didn’t want me to become a sheer lazy born,so I promised that I will make myself thin.I ate a little everyday .I hate make exercise so I didn’t do it,but I’m succeed.I really became thinner than before.It’s my happiest thing in my holiday.I have a sister,in my holiday she played with me in Ming Cheng.We both wanted to watch TV very much.But it’s became a hard problem.My grandfather was watching TV everyday,and all the programs he watched is my most hate program.My grandfather is a curious old man.I don’t know what he thinks.When we not want sleep he slept,when we want sleep or slept he do many thing let me crazy.I think I’m already became a crazy girl.My sleep time is a little,I like in school than home.In the school I can sleep more than at home at least.My skin became bad,so I’m very sad.I’m a girl,I like beauty and I need a good skin.But all the thing I need was became a dream.But my grandmother is very good,she known it and gave me some money let me buy what I like.I was so excited.I went to Pan Shi with my sister and we bought a lot of thing what I like.Then I went to Jilin province to stay with my best friend.She is a beautiful girl,we all like coffee very much.She bought me a lot of coffee when I back to school.It’s my holiday,not good,not bad