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看看我這篇文章有沒有語法錯誤!
I took the airplane to went to Yunnan with my family.On airplane,we saw beautiful cloud sea.After three hours we arrived the destination.
Firstly,we went to the Shilin,there are very palatial.And then we went to the Dali.That is a very quiet small town.After that,we arrived Lijiang,The impression is deepest what for me is the jade dragon snowy mountain.We sit the telpher,arrived 4,506 meters,then I climb this mountain,to 4,680 meters,there had many snows,but also very warm.I wear the T-shirt and stands in the snowy,the feeling is being very comfortable.
This travel,I have took many pictures,but I took an strange picture.In the picture,looks like person stood inside the cloud.That made me feels very scared.
How is this a matter?Who can help me to explain?
I took the airplane to went to Yunnan with my family.On airplane,we saw beautiful cloud sea.After three hours we arrived the destination.
Firstly,we went to the Shilin,there are very palatial.And then we went to the Dali.That is a very quiet small town.After that,we arrived Lijiang,The impression is deepest what for me is the jade dragon snowy mountain.We sit the telpher,arrived 4,506 meters,then I climb this mountain,to 4,680 meters,there had many snows,but also very warm.I wear the T-shirt and stands in the snowy,the feeling is being very comfortable.
This travel,I have took many pictures,but I took an strange picture.In the picture,looks like person stood inside the cloud.That made me feels very scared.
How is this a matter?Who can help me to explain?
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都是些小錯誤,網(wǎng)翻的嗎?我重寫了一遍,我可是很努力哦...I took an airplane to go to Yunnan with my family.On the airplane,we saw the beautiful "the sea of clouds".After three hours we arrived the destinat...
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