1.best known for "the" rolling hills
2.I "believe" the first feature I will describe" in...(suppose represents a kind of uncertainty,not suitable for this situation)
3.when I "stand" (wrong spelling here) "on the hill and overlook the city",I "am" (should have a verb here) always astonished "by" the view.
4.also,light trails (no the) "are" widly used in my hometown .不知道你用light trail是指的什麼,似乎沒有這種交通工具,改用tram/train比較好.
5.i believe/think (not suppose) it is a very convenient (wrong spelling here) "transportation" and it can help people save (should use bare infinite here after "can") much time.
6.Another siginificant characteristic "of the city" is the delicious food which attracts (change the pattern of the sentence,but the original sentence has nothing wrong)...
7....I also believe the style (not color) of (not in) this kind of food may represents the local people of hot personality.
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麻煩幫我看一下有什么語法錯誤,大概還有什么地方需要改進.(是用于口語中!)
麻煩幫我看一下有什么語法錯誤,大概還有什么地方需要改進.(是用于口語中!)
My hometown is an inland city best known for rolling hills and the confluence of the Yangtze and Jialing Rivers.I suppose the first feature I would say in my hometown is its gorgeous cityscape,especially the night scene.When I stant at the relatively high mountain,I always astonished from this view.Also,the light trails widly used in my hometown .I suppose it is a very convinent transpor tool and it can help people saved much time.Another siginificant characteristic is that the delicious food attacts a tons of tourists like the hot pot.Besides,I also believe the color in this kind of food may represents the local people of hot personality.
My hometown is an inland city best known for rolling hills and the confluence of the Yangtze and Jialing Rivers.I suppose the first feature I would say in my hometown is its gorgeous cityscape,especially the night scene.When I stant at the relatively high mountain,I always astonished from this view.Also,the light trails widly used in my hometown .I suppose it is a very convinent transpor tool and it can help people saved much time.Another siginificant characteristic is that the delicious food attacts a tons of tourists like the hot pot.Besides,I also believe the color in this kind of food may represents the local people of hot personality.
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