My English Teacher
My English teacher's name is penelope.Since I can't gain a very good command of English,it is so kind of her to help with my English.
She was born in 2nd october and she comes from America.I think she is very warm because she loves red very much,and I know red represents passion and helpful.She likes beefsteak because it is a triditional American food,and it can remind her of her motherland and think of the old friends and good times of the past.She likes swimming to keep fit and healthy.Also ,every day she gose to work on foot.She is warm-hearted and we guys all like her.
這個你自己再稍微修改一下吧,可能不是初一的水平,我已經(jīng)盡力編造了初中水平了,因為很明顯銜接的不好,沒有串聯(lián)起來.