能不能幫忙修改一下英語(yǔ)作文
Internet plays a very important role in modern life.I always chat on the internet ,sometimes to play online games.Internet also can let us office eaiser.Internet make our life more exciting,but it’s bring some bad things.When people long time working on the computer ,or play games,will endanger people’s health.And it wasn't that people who were already feeling bad spent more time on the Internet,but that using the Net actually appeared to cause the bad feelings.So,Internet is bad for us?I think that this wants to see Internet use habit.As long as has good habit,can avoid the harm.Internet is a virtual space,it allows us to make many far away friends.Internet like a double-edged sword,bring us convenient at the same time,more for us students brought many hidden trouble.
把一些不通還有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤的地方修改一下,寫(xiě)得比較混亂,希望能整理一下,這篇東西要200字,寫(xiě)到那里就寫(xiě)不下去了,