這個句子有什么語法錯誤嗎?I only knew a small truth when I was a 10-year old child that it is of
I is,really,the values of responsibility.I only knew a small truth when I was a 10-year old child that itis of great importance to study hard sothat I can have a good future.But now,I know it’s vital to keep healthy ,so I need to pay more attention to it.
Thus,I suppose everythingwill become successful and effective,which is helpful for increasing peace and goodness in society,suchas to cultivate the sound personality,to ascend ability/to promote strong ability,to enhance the sense of responsibility and so on .
當(dāng)我還是10歲的小孩子時,我只知道一個小道理,就是為了未來去學(xué)習(xí)是重要的.但現(xiàn)在我知道保護(hù)健康才是最重要,并且我會放更多的關(guān)注這塊問題.這樣一來,我想一切都會變得成功和有效,比如培養(yǎng)健全的人格、提升更強(qiáng)的能力、增強(qiáng)責(zé)任感t等等
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