第一行l(wèi)ive 改為living,因為作非謂語成分；where do you live?前不應(yīng)用逗號,最好改為and you?； Nice to meet you! I am a student, are you there? 句子不應(yīng)用逗號隔開因為有兩個謂語； I like collecting stamps, I have a lot of precious stamps 句子不應(yīng)用逗號隔開因為有兩個謂語； can let you have a look,缺主語；I also like sports, very play basketball, running, swimming, mountain climbing and I are very good,very改為especially,play 改為playing,are 改為am；總之這篇文章大錯特錯,簡直誤人子弟……按你那個改就對了嗎？還有其他地方錯誤嗎？謝謝