第一段,we saw a lot of animals there 后面舉例是美國人,亞洲人,這樣真的好嗎?
如果字寫得好看,排版漂亮的話,7分以上應(yīng)該沒問題.
這樣的英語作文,10分能得幾分
這樣的英語作文,10分能得幾分
A Weekend to Remember
Last weekend, I went to San Francisco, CA with some of my friends. There we visited a big zoo. We saw a lot of animals there, such as American, African, Asian, European and so on, we had a good time there because we can only see Chinese in China and we saw many foreigner there. Then we visited a big museum, we saw many beautiful tourist guide, that was nice! In my province, most of the girls aren't very beautiful.
But there was also something scary. The policeman there was scared, we saw a heavy policeman with short black hair, he saw a drunk driver and then he shot him! That was cool but scary.
All in all, I had a nice but scary weekend.
第二段 The policeman there was scared
scared 改成 scary
A Weekend to Remember
Last weekend, I went to San Francisco, CA with some of my friends. There we visited a big zoo. We saw a lot of animals there, such as American, African, Asian, European and so on, we had a good time there because we can only see Chinese in China and we saw many foreigner there. Then we visited a big museum, we saw many beautiful tourist guide, that was nice! In my province, most of the girls aren't very beautiful.
But there was also something scary. The policeman there was scared, we saw a heavy policeman with short black hair, he saw a drunk driver and then he shot him! That was cool but scary.
All in all, I had a nice but scary weekend.
第二段 The policeman there was scared
scared 改成 scary
英語人氣：530 ℃時間：2020-05-01 04:13:32
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
我來回答
類似推薦
- teachers:what the said chinese:do well in writing math:hard-woking history:can do better physics:lazy
- 英語作文★絕對給分、先給10分
- 英語作文,十分急!
- 這樣的英語作文怎么寫
- 英語作文寫偏得幾分
- 若x/y=2/7則7x²-3xy+2y²/2x²-3xy+7y²=
- x的平方+2 y平方-2xy+8y+16=0,則x-y等于
- 只見樹木不見森林?
- I can play basketball( )(good)
- she can's see anything in the dark room 改為同義句
- 李賀的馬詩前兩句通過對 什么 一帶景物的描寫
- 平面與平面的夾角,取值范圍是多少?
猜你喜歡
- 1y是x的函數(shù),用什么表示什么
- 24.She can`t find her mother.Can you help ______.
- 3比喻句判斷：1.雄偉的長城仿佛一條巨龍 2.平靜的湖面像明亮的鏡子 3.我好像在哪里見過你.
- 4王昌齡詩
- 5“不管是大還是小”用英語說是不是No matter great or little?
- 6甲 乙 丙 丁四位同學(xué)依序循環(huán)報數(shù)規(guī)定,①甲 乙 丙 丁首次報數(shù)依次為1 2 3 4,接著甲報5,乙報6…………按此規(guī)律,一直報下去.②當數(shù)報道50時,若報出的數(shù)為3的倍數(shù),舉一次收.擇甲要舉幾次收?
- 7茶葉中氨基酸含量與什么有關(guān),為什么北方的氨基酸含量高,南方的茶多酚含量高
- 8△ABC中，∠B=∠C，D為BC上一點，AB上取BF=CD，AC上取CE=BD，則∠FDE等于（ ） A.90°-∠A B.90°-12∠A C.180°-∠A D.45°-12∠A
- 9f(x)=1/3x^3-ax^2+(a^2-1)x,若方程f(x)=0有三個實數(shù)根,求a的取值范圍
- 10It's business,not personal.漢語意思是什么?
- 11Staying at home
- 12電路中的短路和短接所表達的意思一樣嗎,都是用電器不能使用,