好心人幫我改改托福作文
好心人幫我改改托福作文
崇拜的演員或運(yùn)動(dòng)員,WHY?
It is universally acknowledged that famous persons have a great influence on today's life.All things about them such as "what are they doing now","what will they do in the future",ect,are concerned by people.Why?Just because of their excellent character loved and respected deeply by people.If I had a chance to meet a famous person,there is no deny that I would choose Jacky chen who is hard-working,obliging and what's more he brings China to the world.
First of all,when it comes to an excellent character of Jacky chen--hard-working,we can not emphasize the importance of that too much to his success.His success which is not by lucky like some other enterainers is owing to his consistent endeavour and that is the most important character which I admire.Once he acted as a dead man at the beginning of his career,and the director asked him to lie on the ground without moving.The ground was cold and his body was numb,but he did not give
up and sticked to the task until it was finished.Eventually,his excellent performance leads to his success.
Additional,successful as Jacky chen is,he never forgets to help others.We could find his shadow from lots of charities,as an example of his kindness one must only look at his recent efforts in China to help raise money for SARS research,and he was almost the first entertainer who standed out to do some charities for SARS.Also,After the earthquake in Si chuan province in China,he sent his donation of large amount money to the area and did lots of performance for free in order to let more people pay attention to the area.
What's more,Jacky chen is not only known by Chinese but also known by world,nothing is more important than to bring China to the world in his career.He began to go into Hollywood and did a good job like what he had done in China.Many of his movies are popular worldwide,such as RUSH TIME,WHO AM I,ect.His movies let more people know him as well as China.
崇拜的演員或運(yùn)動(dòng)員,WHY?
It is universally acknowledged that famous persons have a great influence on today's life.All things about them such as "what are they doing now","what will they do in the future",ect,are concerned by people.Why?Just because of their excellent character loved and respected deeply by people.If I had a chance to meet a famous person,there is no deny that I would choose Jacky chen who is hard-working,obliging and what's more he brings China to the world.
First of all,when it comes to an excellent character of Jacky chen--hard-working,we can not emphasize the importance of that too much to his success.His success which is not by lucky like some other enterainers is owing to his consistent endeavour and that is the most important character which I admire.Once he acted as a dead man at the beginning of his career,and the director asked him to lie on the ground without moving.The ground was cold and his body was numb,but he did not give
up and sticked to the task until it was finished.Eventually,his excellent performance leads to his success.
Additional,successful as Jacky chen is,he never forgets to help others.We could find his shadow from lots of charities,as an example of his kindness one must only look at his recent efforts in China to help raise money for SARS research,and he was almost the first entertainer who standed out to do some charities for SARS.Also,After the earthquake in Si chuan province in China,he sent his donation of large amount money to the area and did lots of performance for free in order to let more people pay attention to the area.
What's more,Jacky chen is not only known by Chinese but also known by world,nothing is more important than to bring China to the world in his career.He began to go into Hollywood and did a good job like what he had done in China.Many of his movies are popular worldwide,such as RUSH TIME,WHO AM I,ect.His movies let more people know him as well as China.
其他人氣:298 ℃時(shí)間:2020-08-29 12:22:44
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
我看了看,說實(shí)在的,咱倆英語水平差不多,要是讓我寫也應(yīng)該和你差不多,從你的文章里可以看出來,你應(yīng)該是上過補(bǔ)習(xí)班的吧.我這里談不上什么幫你改,只是和你探討一下.結(jié)構(gòu)上,我覺得你最好加一個(gè)結(jié)尾,做一個(gè)綜述,也就是all...
我來回答
類似推薦
猜你喜歡
- 1世博會(huì)中國館的太陽能光伏發(fā)電系統(tǒng) 年均提供電能為1.08*10^13J,這意味著每年節(jié)約標(biāo)準(zhǔn)煤為( )噸(設(shè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)煤完全燃燒,q煤=3.0*10^7J/kg)
- 2l理發(fā)師翻譯成英語
- 3在下列幾種現(xiàn)象中,系統(tǒng)動(dòng)量守恒的是
- 4王老師在新華書店購買了《童話精選》和《科學(xué)家的故事》一共花了116元,童話每本2
- 51 she also tried to teach him __ to be quiet because other people wanted to rest.A when B where
- 6求滿足條件:頂點(diǎn)在原點(diǎn),關(guān)于x軸對稱,并且經(jīng)過點(diǎn)M(2,-4)的拋物線的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)方程,并求出此拋物線的準(zhǔn)線方程.
- 7“鐵錘錘碗錘不碎”.這句話覺得荒謬的理由是什么?覺得有道理的理由是什么?
- 8如圖,已知直線L1平行L2,且L3和L1、L2分別交于A、B兩點(diǎn),點(diǎn)P在直線AB上.
- 9什么無間
- 10333分之33乘101怎樣簡便計(jì)算
- 11用總分總的形式寫一篇作文
- 121.What do you not like?還是What don't you like?Why do you not like?還是Why don't you like?