1)
I would like to apply for a sales executive position.
我想申請一個銷售代表的職位
應(yīng)該把a改成the,a是特指某一個銷售代表的職位,the是泛指銷售代表這個職位,應(yīng)該這樣：
I would like to apply for the sales executive position.
我想申請銷售代表這個職位
或者I would like to apply for the position of sales executive.
也可以
2)
apply for和apply to be只能選一,不能把for to be放在一起.
應(yīng)該改成I would like to apply for the sales executive position.
我想申請銷售代表這個職位
或者I would like to apply to be a sales executive.
我想申請成為一名銷售代表