自己原創(chuàng)的,寫(xiě)的不好,希望能幫助點(diǎn)什么.
Autumn is coming
The wind kisses my face,
Slowly and slowly
Like the hand of my mother,
The crops become golden,
Beautiful and beautiful,
Like the honouts from me,
The air is cool,
fresh and fresh ,
Like my girl's skin,
How magic it is!
How exciting it is!
what happened?
Oh~Autumn is coming!
我可以自己翻譯下
秋天來(lái)了
風(fēng)親吻著我的臉硤,
輕輕的,緩緩的,
就象是母親的手,
莊稼變成了金色,
很美麗,很漂亮,
象征著我收獲的榮譽(yù),
空氣清清爽爽,
又新鮮,又清新,
象女孩子的皮膚.
多么神奇啊!多么讓人高興啊!
到底是怎么回事呢
啊~原來(lái)是秋天來(lái)了!
覺(jué)得還行,有比喻,有擬人.如果你是在校學(xué)生 還是把象女孩子的皮膚那個(gè)給去掉吧!