真的,語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤不是一點(diǎn)點(diǎn),你應(yīng)該好好補(bǔ)補(bǔ)了.最關(guān)鍵的是一個(gè)句子只有一個(gè)謂語(yǔ)你知道嗎?I accept the truth is that I must face the problems will be probably happened in the future study.I really felt my English is much more better than before.句子而且都很生硬,完全是漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ).
給你改一下：
Thank you so much for your reply and advice.I've thought over your suggestions very carefully.I accept the truth that I must face the problems which will probably happen in the future study.If I cannot solve the English difficulty,how could I face the challenges of professional problems.I should not excuse that I did not get good scores just because of some accidents happening during the test.However,I want to say,I feel my English is better than before after when I found the most deficient part of my English.From then on I kept studying everyday.Could I have the chance to be conditionally accepted if you have not made the final decision?The situation would be changed if I take English class and study hard day after day.No one knows how powerful the human potetial is and it is difficult to say what will happen in the next few months.
好好對(duì)比一下,這樣沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤了,但是句子還有些生硬,沒(méi)有辦法,我是一句句按你的句子修改的.