幫忙改一下英語(yǔ)作文
A student who is a freshman that have had a computer ,a MPfour when he com into the university.It spend much money buying it.
Our class have had a heated discussion about the students.Opinions are divided into two.thinking the student have a rich family during his universities' life is better to buy these things.others hold the opposite opinion it is not good to make a good behave.
As far asi am concerned,the student should take silent attitudestwards theproblem,and be thrifty,and study hard.
滿分25,我們老師給我打了13分,我覺(jué)的不太好,可能是語(yǔ)法上和用詞上有問(wèn)題,幫忙改改,謝謝.