It not is my bag
改為：It is not my bag.
What are eight and six
改為：What is eight and six?
I‘m in No.4 middle school
改為：I‘m in No.4 Middle School.
This is our teacher.We love she very much改為：This is our teacher.We love （her） very much
there is a big apple in the tree
改為：There is a big apple on the tree
Let's to play with them
改為：Let's play with them
What's are in the box?There are some apples.
改為：What are there in the box?There are some apples.
The all boys are here
改為：All the boys are here
I think this is a good book.----I don't think it
改為:I think this is a good book.----I don't think so.
Each of us have a new desk.
改為：Each of us has a new desk.
He doesn't like hamburgers and chicken.
改為：He doesn't like hamburger and chicken
In weekends,what time do you usually run?
改為:At weekends,what time do you usually run?
Mike gets to home at about 4:50 in the afternoon
改為：Mike gets home at about 4:50 in the afternoon
is this his book?Yes,it's
改為：Is this his book?Yes,it's his.
For lunch,what do Lucy like to eat?
改為：For lunch,what does Lucy like to eat?
Does your brother have the lunch at school?
改為:Does your brother have lunch at school?
He often play games after school
改為：He often plays games after school
Because music is relaxing,so Jones likes it.
改為：Because music is relaxing,Jones likes it.
或者Music is relaxing,so Jones likes it.
My mother likes to see a book in the evening
改為：My mother likes to read a book in the evening
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