這個(gè)稍微短一點(diǎn)（對(duì)話）：
The story of snow white
It is a cold winter day.A baby!Her name is Snow White.She is very beautiful.Everybody loves her.The animals love her,too.The queen loves her.But the queen dies.A new queen comes.She is beautiful,but bad.
Children:Snow White is beautiful.
Queen:No,I am beautiful.
This is a magic mirror.
Queen:Mirror,Mirror,who is beautiful?
Mirror:Not you.Snow White.
Queen:No!No!No!Kill Snow White!
Snow White is taken far away.
Snow White:Help me!Help me!Please!Please!
Hunter:All right.Go,Snow White!
The animals take Snow White to a little house.She goes inside.There are 7 little chairs.There are 7 little chairs!She is very hungry.
The 7 dwarfs come home.
Dwarf 1:Who sat here?
Dwarf 2:Who ate this?
Dwarf 3:Who drank this?
Dwarf 4:Who is sleeping here?
Snow White is sleeping.
Dwarf 5:Look,she is sleeping.
Dwarf 6:She is beautiful.
Dwarf 7:Let her sleep.
It’s morning.
Snow White:Hello!
Dwarfs:Why are you here?What’s your name?
She tells her story.
Dwarfs:What an evil queen!
Dwarf 1:I’ll help you.
Dwarf 2:Me,too.
Dwarf 3:Me,too.
Dwarf 4:Stay with us!
Dwarf 5:Yes.
Dwarf 6:Yes.
She stays with the 7 dwarfs.
Dwarfs:This is good.Oh,what fun!
Snow White:Let’s clean up.Bring the plates.Wash them.Wipe them.Put them away.
Dwarfs:Let’s go!Snow White,be careful!
The magic mirror
Queen:Mirror!Mirror,who is beautiful?
Mirror:Not you.Snow White.
Queen:What?I’ll kill her!
Snow White waits at home.
Queen:Apples!Apples!Buy some apples.Buy some apples.They are delicious.
She ate the bad apple.
Queen:Ha!Ha!Ha!Now I’m the most beautiful.
They come home again.
Dwarfs:What happened?Wake up!Wake up!
Queen:Mirror,mirror,now,who is beautiful?
Mirror:You!
Queen:Ha!Ha!Ha!
Dwarfs:Poor Snow White.Good bye,Snow White.
The prince comes.
Dwarfs:Have dinner with us.Please help Snow White.
They take him to Snow White.
Prince:She is beautiful.I want to marry her.
Dwarfs:But you can’t.she is dead.
He prays.The poison apple comes out.
Snow White:What happened?Hello!
Everybody is happy.
Prince:Marry me,Snow White.
Queen:Mirror,mirror,who is beautiful?
Mirror:Not you.Snow White.
Queen:No!No!The mirror breaks.
Prince & Snow White:Good bye!Thank you!Thank you!
They live happily ever after.
這個(gè)是概括：
A long time ago,a child was born to a queen and king and she was called Snow White.When the queen died,the king married again.This new queen was wicked and hated Snow white.The queen gave orders that Snow White was to be treated as a servant.
Snow White grew very beautiful and one day a Prince riding by,saw her at work and fell in love with her.
The queen was beautiful too,and every day she asked her Magic Mirror,"Who is the fairest in the land?" and the mirror always answered,"You are the fairest one of all".
But one day the mirror answered Snow White was the fairest in the land,and in a rage the queen gave orders to one of her Huntsmen to take Snow White into the woods and kill her.
The Huntsman had a kind heart and couldn't do the deed so told her to run away.She fled into the woods where Seven little dwarfs lived.Their house was small and strange.Snow White entered the little house and finding it very untidy,started to clean up.Upstairs she found seven little beds.She was very tired and stretching out on one of the beds,was soon asleep.
When the Dwarfs came home they were surprised to find Snow White and after some argument,decided to let her stay.She promised to cook and look after them.
The Queen discovered where Snow White was living and disguising herself as a witch,took a poisoned apple and set out for the Dwarfs cottage.She gave Snow White the poisoned apple to eat and as soon as she bit the apple,she sank into unconsciousness.
Thinking she was dead,the Dwarfs built a glass coffin and put her in it.For days she lay in the forest in her glass coffin.One day,the Prince was riding through the forest looking for Snow White and found her.He leaned over and kissed her.She opened her eyes and sat up with a smile.Everyone was happy.The Prince took Snow White to his palace where they were married and lived happily ever after.
這些如果都翻譯下來(lái),實(shí)在太多了,哪句不懂,可以問(wèn)我.可是縮寫(xiě)沒(méi)有是對(duì)話的呀，你寫(xiě)的為什么有呢？？？？？因?yàn)檫@個(gè)寫(xiě)的是：白雪公主，七個(gè)小矮人，王后，王子等之間的對(duì)話，只不過(guò)是縮寫(xiě)。可我們老師說(shuō)縮寫(xiě)不能有對(duì)話，但是你寫(xiě)的還是不錯(cuò)的！