初中英語(yǔ)作文,求老師糾正點(diǎn)評(píng)下~,
初中英語(yǔ)作文,求老師糾正點(diǎn)評(píng)下~,
,主要就是 幫忙查看一下作文是否有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤.還有就是,作文是20分的滿分,求老師毫不吝嗇地打下分?jǐn)?shù),
作文主要內(nèi)容：China Dream & My University Dream
作文：
Recently we have held a class meeting on "China Dream & My University Dream".I believe that many classmates of mine have a great dream ,and me too.As the power of much easier achieving our dream which is greatest,I make my mind to study harder for going to Peking University.At this time,maybe you want to ask me "What is your dream?" Perhaps you will be amazed by my answer,but I have to say that my root dream is to make our country stronger and stronger.Please don't laugh at me,because dreams must be the first and actions later.I'll study harder at school ,read more good books at home,and to make my brain runs more quickly.I'll play basketball in my spare time.In a word,I'll try my best!
,主要就是 幫忙查看一下作文是否有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤.還有就是,作文是20分的滿分,求老師毫不吝嗇地打下分?jǐn)?shù),
作文主要內(nèi)容：China Dream & My University Dream
作文：
Recently we have held a class meeting on "China Dream & My University Dream".I believe that many classmates of mine have a great dream ,and me too.As the power of much easier achieving our dream which is greatest,I make my mind to study harder for going to Peking University.At this time,maybe you want to ask me "What is your dream?" Perhaps you will be amazed by my answer,but I have to say that my root dream is to make our country stronger and stronger.Please don't laugh at me,because dreams must be the first and actions later.I'll study harder at school ,read more good books at home,and to make my brain runs more quickly.I'll play basketball in my spare time.In a word,I'll try my best!
英語(yǔ)人氣：208 ℃時(shí)間：2019-08-19 10:41:17
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
不用have held改用heldmeeting abouta great dream===dreamsand me too====and so am i中間有一句不曉得你想表明什么root dream如果你是指最大的愿望或者最主要的愿望的話用main dream 比較好最后突然講到業(yè)余時(shí)間打...So helpful you are ~ ,I'll study harder and harder with your help. Thank you very much!我大學(xué)英語(yǔ)過(guò)了六級(jí)的。I have already passed CET6(College English Test Band 6) . It's my pleasure to help you with your English
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