英語(yǔ)高手幫我修改考研作文.急
考研看圖作文
具體就是一個(gè)人站在海上的船上拿著一張票.另一個(gè)人拿著行李站在岸上看著船.
下面有一行字：機(jī)遇就像一艘不定期的船,只有準(zhǔn)備充分的人才能上船.
As is vividly depicted in the drawing,there is a ship on the sea.One man,holding a ticket,enters into the ship.However,the other who does not have a ticket only can watch the further and further ship with unsatisfied.The caption reads,“Opportunity is like a ship which is only ready for a man with ticket.”
The artist uses this unique metaphor in order to tell us a meaningful philosophy,to make adequate prepares for chances,of life.Many famous people can always turn commonplace things to advantage,and then catch a rare chance.The most persuasive example is Jay Chou,a China-renowned pop music star.Many songs signed by him were not accepted by some stars in the early time.His boss gives him a opportunity to perform these songs by himself.Finally,he catches the chance,and succeeds.
From my perspective,it is necessary for us to make adequate preparations before opportunities coming.Although it may make some people feel boring and ineffective,the huge advantages emerge with the coming of opportunities.（這句感覺(jué)太低級(jí)了,能不能修改的高級(jí)點(diǎn)謝謝!）Only these people with full preparations can hold fast to chances.
有沒(méi)有能改進(jìn)的地方,還有建議.