英語(yǔ)幫忙修改文章錯(cuò)誤
英語(yǔ)幫忙修改文章錯(cuò)誤
這個(gè)是我自己寫,但是老師說過我很中式英語(yǔ),所以不敢拿上臺(tái)
I hear a story about two man.one called knife,and one called fork.They were killer and no one can destroied them.They're so strong if they were together.So the government were very cared about them.
One day ,knife asked fork to a place and talked .Actually,they were brothers.A long time ago,their parents has been killed.They swore to killed the murderer.
Yes ,they were not believed this world again.
Knife found the murderer from their parents.He quickly to asked fork to remembered to with him to kill the murderer.Fork was really excited about that.But they were also famous killer,they could not stay together.
AT night,Fork has be killed by the government
Next day,Knife went to the murderer's house quickly.But he didn't see the Fork.When he was thinking about this,he heard a noice.It was the gun's.It must be the murderer's gun,but when he looked inside the house,he saw many police from the government.
He was dead
Some one said,Is the Fork to betray the knife.But no one know.Actrally the government are know their move at early
At the nether world,they're not brother anymore,they are personal enemy forever
請(qǐng)有能力的拜托了,好的還可以追加分?jǐn)?shù)!
這個(gè)是我自己寫,但是老師說過我很中式英語(yǔ),所以不敢拿上臺(tái)
I hear a story about two man.one called knife,and one called fork.They were killer and no one can destroied them.They're so strong if they were together.So the government were very cared about them.
One day ,knife asked fork to a place and talked .Actually,they were brothers.A long time ago,their parents has been killed.They swore to killed the murderer.
Yes ,they were not believed this world again.
Knife found the murderer from their parents.He quickly to asked fork to remembered to with him to kill the murderer.Fork was really excited about that.But they were also famous killer,they could not stay together.
AT night,Fork has be killed by the government
Next day,Knife went to the murderer's house quickly.But he didn't see the Fork.When he was thinking about this,he heard a noice.It was the gun's.It must be the murderer's gun,but when he looked inside the house,he saw many police from the government.
He was dead
Some one said,Is the Fork to betray the knife.But no one know.Actrally the government are know their move at early
At the nether world,they're not brother anymore,they are personal enemy forever
請(qǐng)有能力的拜托了,好的還可以追加分?jǐn)?shù)!
英語(yǔ)人氣：808 ℃時(shí)間：2020-03-26 21:54:08
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
I hear 不是過去時(shí)嗎?沒改成過去時(shí)啊.man 前面有two,要改成men.第二個(gè)句子應(yīng)該改成and the other one called fork.killer要改成復(fù)數(shù)形式.can后面是加動(dòng)詞原形的,而且用destroy不恰當(dāng),用beat比較好.第四句有點(diǎn)別扭啊.我覺得If they're together ,they will be very strong 更好.So the government were very care about them?覺得怪怪的.這是貶義的吧.改成So the government were very concerned about them.如果沒學(xué)過那個(gè)詞組的話pay attention to也是可以的.第二段第一句knife askedfork to a place to talk.第三句their parents had been killed.第四They swore to kill the murderer.第三段莫名其妙,怎么又again了呢?改成from then on.第四段.Knife found the murderer who killed their parents.Heasked fork tokill the murderer with him immediately.But they were both famous killer,they could not stay together.其實(shí)我很郁悶著名跟不能在一起有什么關(guān)系.然后下段就讓我嚇到了.這叉子死得太突然了吧.算了.不擾亂你的行文.繼續(xù)改Fork had been killed by the government.next day前要加the.下面.怎么又quickly了.刪了吧.還有,我一直想說了.既然前面的刀子叉子沒加the.這里就也別加了吧.When he was thinking about it,he heard a voice.It was the report of the gun.but when he looked into the house.It is because ofFork 's treachery.But no one know exactly.Actrally the governmentknew their action at first.At the another world.they won't be brother anymore.they will be personal enemies forever.純手打.好累的.十一點(diǎn)多幫你改作文.多給點(diǎn)分吧.還有.這位小哥你讀幾年級(jí)啊?在哪里讀?你老師說的還真不錯(cuò).不過我看了半天不知道你這篇文章要表達(dá)什么.我只是改改語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤.不管怎樣.祝你學(xué)業(yè)有成啦.
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