格式不錯(cuò)條例清晰邏輯明確.
但是看不到好詞匯啊怎么還有firstly,however,多用nevertheless這類的吧
句式變化太少了.
可能是5分左右吧.
建議你找個(gè)老師系統(tǒng)改善吧,大眼一掃可改的地方好多.用時(shí)有些長(zhǎng)了,而且這個(gè)話題是N年前的了吧.
摸板句太明顯了.
加油.
我雅思寫作能考多少
我雅思寫作能考多少
之前沒(méi)接觸過(guò)雅思寫作,網(wǎng)上看了看各個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)段的例文,也看不出什么門道,這里高手多,我就來(lái)打算寫一篇,各位前輩來(lái)看看吧.
我隨便看到個(gè)題目,說(shuō)是學(xué)生用電腦做作業(yè)好不好,就寫他了.
Recently,if you go to libraries,you will notice that the number of students using their laptops to do their homework has increased dramatically.This has triggered a debate as to whether or not student should use their computers to do their homework.
Firstly,there are some advantages of using computers to finish homework.Students can use internet to search their topic instantly when required,and use the materials or reference from the web directly.Also,computer animation and pictures can be added to the work,make their explanation more understandable.
However,the negative effects of laptop to do homework is also noticeable.Computer screen is eye-damaging,and the radiation of computers increases the chance of computer-related deceases.Distraction caused by computer,such as game and social media,may distract students from doing their work.And the use of auto-correction during typing can also deteriorate students' abilities to spell vocabulary correctly.
There are both advantages and disadvantages of students using computer to do homework.I would recommend mature students to use computer to do their homework while younger students should still use the traditional way of doing homework and some degree of parental control is required when use computers
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之前沒(méi)接觸過(guò)雅思寫作,網(wǎng)上看了看各個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)段的例文,也看不出什么門道,這里高手多,我就來(lái)打算寫一篇,各位前輩來(lái)看看吧.
我隨便看到個(gè)題目,說(shuō)是學(xué)生用電腦做作業(yè)好不好,就寫他了.
Recently,if you go to libraries,you will notice that the number of students using their laptops to do their homework has increased dramatically.This has triggered a debate as to whether or not student should use their computers to do their homework.
Firstly,there are some advantages of using computers to finish homework.Students can use internet to search their topic instantly when required,and use the materials or reference from the web directly.Also,computer animation and pictures can be added to the work,make their explanation more understandable.
However,the negative effects of laptop to do homework is also noticeable.Computer screen is eye-damaging,and the radiation of computers increases the chance of computer-related deceases.Distraction caused by computer,such as game and social media,may distract students from doing their work.And the use of auto-correction during typing can also deteriorate students' abilities to spell vocabulary correctly.
There are both advantages and disadvantages of students using computer to do homework.I would recommend mature students to use computer to do their homework while younger students should still use the traditional way of doing homework and some degree of parental control is required when use computers
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