幫我看一下這篇短文有沒有錯(cuò).急
幫我看一下這篇短文有沒有錯(cuò).急
Helli, everyone! I am on duty today. Today is Monday. Today is December 21 th 2009. We are all here. I have a good friend, her name is Wang Min. We called her Lu Dan, because she has a round face. Her hair is short black, she has a big nose, but her eyes are small. Her language is good and my English is good, so she helps me study language, and I help her study English. We help each other. Her birthday is at Christmas, I will wish her a happy birthday.
Helli, everyone! I am on duty today. Today is Monday. Today is December 21 th 2009. We are all here. I have a good friend, her name is Wang Min. We called her Lu Dan, because she has a round face. Her hair is short black, she has a big nose, but her eyes are small. Her language is good and my English is good, so she helps me study language, and I help her study English. We help each other. Her birthday is at Christmas, I will wish her a happy birthday.
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可以這樣改：Helli,everyone!I am on duty today.Today is Monday,December 21 th 2009.We are all here.I have a good friend,her name is Wang Min.We call her Lu Dan,because she has a round face.Her hair is short and black,she has a big nose,but her eyes are small.Her Chinese is good and my English is good,so she helps me with my Chinese and I help her study English.We help each other.Her birthday is on Christmas,I wish her a happy birthday.我有一個(gè)好朋友,她的名字是王敏.我們叫她鹵蛋,是因?yàn)樗幸粡垐A圓的臉.她的頭發(fā)又短又黑.她的鼻子很大,但是她的眼睛卻很小.她的語文好,而我是英語,所以她幫我學(xué)習(xí)語文,而我?guī)椭龑W(xué)習(xí)英語,我們互相幫助.她的生日就在圣誕節(jié),我祝她生日快樂.Christmas是具體某一天,前面的介詞應(yīng)該用on 不是感覺,你是學(xué)生吧?就中學(xué)生而言,記住具體某一天前的介詞用on,除非是固定的詞組
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