我自己些的英文文章 希望能得到批評!
故事背景是 一個寫了篇文章 說他上希望去看戲,但他座位后面有一男一女 他們說話的聲音很大,嚴重影響到作者.我只是把這故事復述變.(復述的內(nèi)容是按照書上提問以問答的形式 簡略些成文章的) 有什么不對的問題 望賜教!
the writer want to theatre last week,he did not enjoy the paly.a young man and a young woman were siting behind him.were talking very loudy.the writer could not hear the actors.the writer turned round ,"I can`t hear a word!"the wairter said.the young man said:"the play is not interesting!" 陳述的對嗎?有什么不對的問題 望賜教!