【急】請(qǐng)高手幫忙改下【英語(yǔ)作文】
請(qǐng)幫忙改下這篇作文,我知道個(gè)別介詞和句式使用不得當(dāng),請(qǐng)有錯(cuò)盡管改.如果可以的話請(qǐng)告訴我錯(cuò)因.直接改錯(cuò)句即可.
The girl is tall,with long hair,wearing a pair of glasses.She is our monitor,which I admire most in our class.
She is a excellent leader in our class.She helps teachers to take charge of（管理,對(duì)否?） the class well.What’s more,at the School’s Sport Meeting,she lead（過去式,不懂） us training hard to compete in the programmas.
She is my closed friend,as well.She is always explaining the difficulties of study to me with patience.And it seems that she never be tired of my complex problems.I would never forget the words she told me,The silly bird should fly first.So she is such a person,who usually does some preview before others.So hardworking is she tha she gets a good result in study.
As a monitor,she is devoted to classwork.And as a friend,how kindhearted she is!Besides,she is a good example on study for me!