誰能幫我修改一下這首英文詩?
If every coner of the earth is full of bright
Who will need stars,who will
Gaze during the night
Look for the distant comfort
Who dislikes
Everyday
Is a poem
Eyery word is a star
Like bees vibrate in the mind
Who dislikes ,to have a soft night
As soft as a lake
Fireflies and stars are swimming in the water lilies
Who dislikes spring,birds are siting in the branches
Like stars twinkling in the sky
Glinting sound float from a distance
Wads of white lilac are indistinct
If every coner of the earth is full of bright
Who will need stars,who will
Burn solitarily in the cold
Look for the starred hopes
Who likes
A year and a year
Write suffering poems
Every last one is a bery of quiverring stars
Like the ice covered the mind
Who likes ,to see the night is forze
As stiff as a piece of land
The wind blow down a star after a star
Who dislikes the waving flag and the fire
Pour forth golden stars
When the stars in the sky are tired --- rise
To shine where the sun can not shine
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